thoughts on my phil collins in the air tonight remix i made?

[Demarcus Cousins]

http://soundcloud.com/rekedmc916/phil-collins-remix-produced-by

i need peoples opinions on this instrumental i just made.
is it good?

 

[RookieOfTheDay]

http://soundcloud.com/rekedmc916/phil-collins-remix-produced-by

i need peoples opinions on this instrumental i just made.
is it good?

Reminds me of one of those Casio keyboard sample tunes. It's arranged pretty well, though.

 

[Demarcus Cousins]

thanks! i did all the notes, played the keys, played the guitar and made the drums all on the pc. i made this in a program called fruityloops.